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Giving / receiving feedback

CMS.100

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Getting started: two general paper structures

  • IMRAD (intro, methods / materials, results, and discussion): common for scientific journal articles
  • IBC (intro, body, conclusion)

→ Still lots of variation across papers and disciplines, but this covers about 99% of them. You still need to break down what “body” means!

→ Even if it feels counter-intuitive, sometimes it’s useful to write the intro and conclusion last.

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Reverse outlining / summarizing the reading

  • It’s a little easier for some academic papers because they have ready-made headings — but are they effective?
  • Major components of a paper
    • What are the problems / questions that the authors are trying to solve / answer?
    • How do the authors begin answering these questions?
    • How are these questions related to other research or writing about the topic?
    • Why should we care about this topic and / or these conclusions?
    • How should a reader do or think differently after reading the paper?

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Why reverse-outline a reading?

  • You don’t always have to do it explicitly, but learning how to exercise this muscle will be helpful for getting through readings more quickly
  • Good for reading comprehension: read strategically. What does the author want you to get out of this?
    • This is sometimes tricky, especially if the writing is bad 🙈
  • For drafts of papers, this helps you follow your argument throughout the paper and triage where you’re spending too much (or too little) time.

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Three approaches to reverse-outlining the reading

  • By topic sentence: does each paragraph (or small cluster of paragraphs) have a succinct version of the paragraph’s argument?
    • Copypasta topic sentences in order to see the general throughline of the argument
  • Idea-by-idea: what are the “units of thought” in each paragraph?
    • More than one idea per paragraph is fine!
    • Try to express those thoughts in complete sentences rather than bullet points
  • Answering major components of paper: does the paper answer the questions from previous slide succinctly?

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Create Google / Word doc + reverse-outline one of the readings from class

(you’ll submit the doc to Canvas for attendance points)

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Exchange paper with your partner and repeat the same exercise

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Meeting people where they are …

  • Principle of charitability: what is the paper trying to do and how?
    • Should you hold a Disney movie (for example) to the same criteria / standards as Parasite?
    • The New Yorker film critic column ❌
  • Goal of the paper + what it does well
  • What is the stated goal and what actually transpires in the reading?

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Writing feedback

  • Ask your partner: what kind of feedback would you like?
  • Start with some factual statements / summarization
    • What is the paper about and what are its major questions?
    • How does the paper propose to answer the question?
  • Briefly state what contribution the submission makes. What are the strengths of this piece?

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Step by step process…

Triage the content:

  • Are any needed sections missing? Are any sections expendable?

Review each section:

  • How well does it advance the main goal?
  • How well does it meet the criteria for the section type?
  • Are any necessary details or implications missing?

Draft alternate sentences:

  • Perform copy-editing and verbiage reduction

Bring everything together, make passes to adjust for length.

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Write your feedback in the same Google / Word doc (200+ words) and share with your partner