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kodar naaqa Aga`vaala

ek pircaya

• janma : sana 1911 ]%trp`doXa ko baa^Mda ijalao ko kmaaisana gaa^Mva maoM.
• iXaxaa : [laahabaad sao ka^laoja¹iXaxaa,Ê Aagara ivaºiva sao vakalat kI.
• yauvaavasqaa sao hI kavya¹rcanaae^M¸ “maaQaurI” naamak pi~ka maoM p`kaXana.
• baad maoM p`gaitvaadI AaMdaolana sao jauD,o AaOr p`gaitvaadI kiva ko $p maoM iva#yaat.

rcanaae^M :

• “naIMd ko baadla”¸“yauga kI gaMgaa”¸ “ laaok tqaa Aalaaok”
• yao tInaaoM rcanaae^M “ fUla nahIM rMga baaolato hOM” naamak saMga`h maoM p`kaaiXat.
• Anya kavya¹saMga`h ¹ Aaga ka Aa[naa¸ pMK AaOr ptvaar,¸ maar Pyaar kI qaapoM¸ kho kodar KrI¹KrI Aaid

purskar

• saaoivayat laOMD naohÉ purskar
• saaih%ya AkadmaI purskar

Paaz ka naama :� caMd`gahnaa sao laaOTtI baor

doK Aayaa caMd` gahnaa.

doKta hU^M dRXya Aba maOM

maoD, pr [sa Kot kI baOza Akolaa.

ek baIto ko barabar

yah hra izganaa canaaÊ

baa^MQao maurOza SaISa pr

CaoTo gaulaabaI fUla kaÊ

saja kr KD,a hO.

Baava :

caMd`gahnaa naamak sqaana sao laaOTto samaya kiva ka iksaana mana Kot¹Kilahana evaM ]nako p`akRitk saaOMdya- kI Aaor sahja hI AakiYa-t hao jaata hO. vahKot kI maoD, pr Akolaa baOzkr ]sa Ad\Baut p`akRitk dRXya kao inaharnao lagata hO.

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vah doKta hO¹¹ canao ka ek izganaa paOQaa ijasa pr gaulaabaI fUla inaklao hue hOM eosaa lagata hO maanaao ]sanao isar pr gaulaabaI pgaD,I baa^MQa rKI hao.

kizna Sabd

1ºbaIto ¹ iba<aa ³ ek maap ´

2ºizganaa ¹ CaoTo kd ka¸

3ºmaurOza ¹ isar pr baa^MQaI jaanao vaalaI pgaD,I

³doXaja Xabd´

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Baava¹saaOndya--

yaha^M p`kRit ka A%yaMt saundr¸ sajaIlaa¸ rmaNaIya evaM ica<aakYa-k tqaa kalpinak ica~Na huAa hO.Ad\Baut maanavaIkrNa idKa[- dota hO.

pasa hI imalakr ]gaI hO

baIca maoM AlasaI hzIlaI

doh kI ptlaI¸ kmar kI hO lacaIlaI

naIla fUlao fUla kao isar pr caZ,akr

kh rhI hO¸ jaao Cue yah

dU^M hRdya ka dana ]sakao.

]sako pasa dubalaI ptlaI¸ ijaddI AlasaI KD,I hO AaOr ]sa pr naIlao fUla iKlao hOM ]sakI kmar lacaIlaI hO. vah Apnaa )dya dana krnao kao tOyaar hO. ]sako iKlao naIlao fUla eosao p`tIt haoto hMO maanaao vah naIlao fUla isar pr caZ,akr sabasao kh rhI hao jaao maoro [sa fUla kao CU laogaa maOM ]sakao Apnaa idla do dUU^MgaI Aqaa-t ]saI sao Pyaar k````````$^MgaI.

Baava¹saaOndya-

yaha^M AlasaI ko paOQao evaM ]sakoo fUlaaoM ko Ap`itma saaOndya- ka vaNa-na ikyaa gayaa hO.

AaOr sarsaaoM kI na pUCao

hao ga[- sabasao sayaanaI

haqa pIlao kr ilae hOM

byaah¹maMDp maoM pQaarI

faga gaata maasa fagauna

Aa gayaa hO Aaja jaOsao.

doKta hU^M maOM : svayaMvar hao rha hO¸

p`kRit ka Anauraga¹AMcala rha hO

[sa ivajana maoM¸

dUr vyaapairk nagar sao

p`oma kI ip`ya BaUima ]pjaa} AiQak hO.

sarsaaoM ka tao khnaa hI @yaa ]sako paOQao baDo, haokr samaJadar laD,kI kI trh hao gae hOM.]sa pr pIlao¹pIlao fUla iKla Aae hOM.]sako pIlao fUlaaoM kao doKkr eosaa lagata hO maanaao vah ivavaah ko ilae haqa pIlao krnao ko ilae tOyaar haokr ivavaah maMDp maoM Aa[- hO. kiva kao eosaa laga rha hO maanaao svayaMvar hao rha hao.

haolaI ko samaya falgauna maasa maoM laaogaaoM nao faga gaanaa AarMBa kr idyaa hO.

Baava¹saaOndya-

sarsaaoM ko fUlaao sao lahlaato Kot maoM p`kit $pI maa^M ko p`oma Baro Aa^Mcala ka manaaoharI vaNa-na ikyaa gayaa hO.

AaOr pOraoM ko tlao hO ek paoKr

]z rhIM [samaoM lahiryaa^M¸

naIla tla maoM jaao ]gaI hO Gaasa BaUrI¸

lao rhI vah BaI lahiryaa^M.

ek caa^MdI ka baD,a¹saa gaaola KMBaa

Aa^MK kao hO cakmakata .

hOM k[- p%qar iknaaro

pI rho caupcaap panaI¸

Pyaasa jaanao kba bauJaogaI²

yaha^M kiva Apnao sao qaaoD,I dUr isqat ek paoKr ka vaNa-na kr rha hO ijasakI tlahTI maoM BaUrI rMga kI Gaasa ]gaI hO. vah Gaasa ]sa paoKr maoM ]znao vaalaI CaoTI¹CaoTI lahiryaaoM ko karNa Daola rhI hO.

paoKr kI sath pr saUya- kI ikrNaaoM ka ibaMba caa^MdI ko KMBao kI Baa^Mit idKayaa gayaa hO.caa^MdI ko samaana p`tIt haoto gaaola KMBao ka ibaMba Aa^MKaoM kao cakacaaOMQa kr dota hO.

talaaba ko iknaaro Anaiganat p%qar pD,o hOM jaao panaI pIto hue laga rho hOM.pr pta nahIM ]nakI Pyaasa kba bauJaogaI.

sayaanaI ¹ samaJadar

• haqa pIlao krnaa³mauº´ ¹ ivavaah krnaa
• byaah¹maMDp ¹ foro laonao ko ilae maMDp ³tºsa´
• faga ¹ ek laaokgaIt

³haolaI ko samaya gaayaa jaata hO´

• Anauraga¹AMcala¹ p`oma $pI Aa^Mcala

kizna Xabd :

Baava¹saaOndya-

kiva nao paoKr ko pasa ko yaqaaqa- p`akRitk dRXyaaoM ka manaaoharI ica~Na ikyaa hO.

caup KDa bagaulaa Dubaae Ta^Mga jala maoM

doKto hI maIna caMcala

Qyaana¹inad`a %yaagata hOOM,

caT dbaa kr caaoMca maoM

naIcao galao ko Dalata hO.

ek kalao maaqa vaalaI catur icaiD,yaa

Svaot pMKaoM ko JapaTo maar faOrna

TUT pDtI hO Baro jala ko )dya pr

ek ]jalaI caTula maClaI

caaoMca pIlaI maoM dbaa kr

dUr ]D,tI hO gagana maoM

]sa paoKr ko jala maoM ek bagaulaa Qyaana magna haokr KD,a hoO jaao caMcala maC,laI kao doKto hI ApnaI Qyaana maud`a %yaagakr JaT ApnaI caaoMca sao maClaI kao pkD,kr Apnao galao maoM ]tar laota hO.

vahIM ]sa paoKr maoM kalao maaqao vaalaI catur icaiD,yaa Apnao safod pMKaoM sao jala maoM JapT\Ta maarkr ek catur maClaI kao pkD,kr AakaSa maoM ]D, jaatI hO.

• paoKr : CaoTa talaaba
• caTula : caalaak¸ catur
• maIna : maClaI
• ibaMba : caaxauYa ibaMba

kizna Xabd :

AaO’ yahIM sao¹¹

BaUima }^McaI hO jaha^M sao ¹

rola kI pTrI ga[- hO.

T/ona ka Ta[ma nahIM hO.

maOM yaha^M svacCMd hU^M¸

jaanaa nahIM hO.

ica~kUT kI AnagaZ, caaOD,I

kma }^McaI¹}^McaI phaiD,yaa^M

dUr idXaaAaoM tk fOlaI hOM.

baa^MJa BaUima pr

[Qar¹]Qar rIvaa^M ko poD,

ka^MTodar ku$p KD,o hOM.

sauna pD,ta hO maIza¹maIza rsa Tpkata

sauggao ka svar

ToM ToM ToM ToM

sauna pD,ta hO.

paoKr sao kuC dUrI AaOr }^Mcaa[- pr rola kI pTrI hO laoikna ABaI rola ko Aanao¹jaanao ka samaya nahIM hO. [sailae kiva mau@t Baava sao yaha^M baOza huAa p`kRit ka saaOndya- inaharnao maoM vyast hO. kiva kI najaraoM ko saamanao KotaoM kI }baD,¹KabaD,¸baoDaOla caaOD,I kma }^McaI phaiDyaa^M fOlaI hu[- hOM. yaha^M kI jamaIna Anauva-r hO.khIM¹khIM rIvaa^M ko k^MTIlao AaOr kuÉp poD, hOM.eosaI phaD,I AaOr }sar¹baMjar BaUima maoM BaI taoto ka maIza AaOr sarsa svar saunaa[- pD,ta hO.yah @yaa kma AaXcaya- hO²

Baava¹saaOndya-

yaha^M kiva nao ApnaI svacCMdta AaOr ica~kUT kI phaiD,yaaoM ka vaNa-na ikyaa hO.

kizna Sabd :

• svacCMd¹ svatM~¸ mau@t
• AnagaZ, ¹ }baD,¹KabaD,
• baa^MJa BaUima ¹ jaha^M kuC nahIM haota hO
• rIvaa^M ¹ ek k^MTIlaa poD,

vanasqalaI ka )dya caIrta,,,,,,¸

]zta¹igarta¸

saarsa ka svar

iTrTaoM iTrTaoM

mana haota hO¹

]D, jaa}^M maOM

pr fOlaae saarsa ko saMga

jaha^M jaugaula jaaoDI rhtaI hO

hro Kot maoM¸

saccaI p`oma khanaI sauna laU^M

cauPpo¹cauPpo.

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jaMgala ka hRdya caIrta huAa saarsa ka svar BaI saunaa[- pD,ta hO. kiva ka mana klpnaa krnao lagata hO ik vah BaI saarsa ko yaugala jaaoD,o ko saaqa ]D,kr vaha^M jaae¸ jaha^M vao daonaaoM rhto hOM. vaha^M vah ]nakI p`oma khanaI kao caupcaap saunao.

kavya ¹ saaOndya- :

• BaaYaa KD,I baaolaI ihndI ijasamaoM doXaja Xabd tqaa mauhavaraoM ka saundr p`yaaoga huAa hO.
• ga`amaINa imaT\TI kI saugaMQa sao sarabaaor hO yah kivata.

AlaMkar :

• Anaup`asa¸ ]pmaa¸$pk¸ ]%p`oxaa jaOsao AlaMkaraoM ka KUbasaUrt p`yaaoga d`YTvya hO.
• ica~a%mak BaaYaa ka p`yaaoga BaI AitsauMdr bana pD,a hO.

maanavaIkrNa

maanavaIkrNa AlaMkar ka p`yaaoga tao [sa kivata ko saaOndya- maoM caar caa^Md lagaa idyaa hO.kiva nao inamnailaiKt sqaanaaoM pr p`kRit ka maanavaIkrNa ikyaa hO¹

• yah hra izganaa canaa,¸ baa^MQao maurOzaººººsaja KDa,,.
• AlasaI hzIlaI¸doh ptlaIºººº)dya ka dana ]sakao.
• sarsaaoM kI na pUCao hao ga[- sabasao sayaanaIºººº byaah¹maMDp maoM pQaarI.
• faga gaata maasa fagaunaºººº
• p%qar iknaaro pI rho caupcaap panaIºººº
• vanasqalaI ka hRdya caIrta ººº.