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Advanced Headline Writing

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Writing for Online

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What is SEO?

Search engine optimization, as it pertains to journalism, means modifying headlines online to try to increase web traffic coming from organic searches �to your site and/or a specific article.

On average, Google searches are no more than 2-4 words long and consist of names and keywords.

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2-4 words

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Writing for Better SEO

Does your headline have...

  • Keywords. What are the common words and phrases at the heart of your article? (Examples: high school, marching band, basketball, election)
  • Proper names. Names of people, places, companies and organizations in your article. (Examples: Carlmont High School, Normal Ironmen, Facebook, Ariana Grande, FOX News)
  • Full personal names. Although you’d use last names in print, use full names online because you search by full names when searching for people.
  • Unique information. What’s in your story that people might be looking for that other websites don’t have?

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PRO TIP

Don’t overdo it. Headlines should always be clear and concise.

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Modifying Print Headlines for Online

Online: Charleston Police warns against credit card fraud

(Proper name)

(Keyword)

Online: Announcer Matt Piescinski records Eastern Illinois sports history

(Full personal name)

(Keyword)

(Proper name)

Headlines courtesy of The Daily Eastern News, Eastern Illinois University

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Modifying Print Headlines for Online

Online: St. Charles Borromeo Church to kick off summer with Start-Up Festival

(Proper name)

(Proper name)

Online: Mick Viken comes up short in pole vault at NCAA Championships

(Full personal name)

(Proper name)

(Keyword)

Headlines courtesy of The Daily Eastern News, Eastern Illinois University

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Modifying Print Headlines for Online

Full personal names could include the name of an opinion columnist, for example, when that writer’s name is recognizable.

Example: Bill Plaschke, Los Angeles Times sports columnist:

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Distinguishing Types of Content Online �and Content by Specific Writers

As in the Plaschke example, you may modify print headlines online by adding a name or keyword, with a colon, before the headline (i.e. “Plaschke:”).

  • This lets readers know exactly what kind of content they’ll find at the link.

“Plaschke:” “Staff Editorial:”�“Photos:” “Column:”�“Video:” “Review:”

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How it looks in print:

How you might modify it online:

Staff Editorial: Charleston City Council was right to approve funds for building improvements

(Identifier)

(Proper name)

Headlines courtesy of The Daily Eastern News, Eastern Illinois University

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Clickbait

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What is Clickbait?

Clickbait headlines are ones used to attract attention and encourage more clicks on an article, but they should be used sparingly.

It should still be clear what the subject of the content is.

(Clickbait: Unique, attention-grabbing line)

(Proper name keeps subject clear)

Headline from Vox.com

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Blending SEO and Clickbait principles.

Popularly-searched proper names: �Ralphie, ‘A Christmas Story,’ and ‘Elf’

A vague but intriguing phrase: �“That moment you realize...”

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Spotting Clickbait Tactics

Over-emphasizing the drama

Posing a challenge

Everyone’s talking about it

Suggesting you’ll have a reaction

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Spotting Clickbait Tactics

Odd numbers

+ Implication of surprising truth

+ Suggesting you’ll have a reaction

+ Umbrella vagueness

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Multi-Line Headlines in Print

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PRO TIP

You can’t control headline breaks online, so don’t try to.

Differences in user’s screen sizes and other aspects of websites leave headline breaks out of your control.

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Multi-Line Headlines in Print

Multi-line print headlines are a product of space limitations. When you have one, pay attention to line breaks. Try to keep breaks that feel natural when reading.

Good: House votes on impeachment,� president will face senate trial

Bad: House votes on impeachment, president� will face senate trial

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Multi-Line Headlines in Print

Keep punctuation (commas) at the end of lines, except for hyphens and dashes. � Good: House votes on impeachment, � president will face senate trialBad: Jefferson becomes two-time chess champion

Avoid leaving “to” at the end of lines.� Bad: Olympian risking it all to� swim across Pacific

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Avoid breaks that mislead or change the meaning

Better: Charleston rated Illinois’ third-best city� for young people to raise family

Headline courtesy of The Daily Eastern News, Eastern Illinois University

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