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How Can Logic Help High School EFL Learners Write?

Prepared by

Tan Liang Ye

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Contents

1. Background & context

2. Examples of class activities

3. Discussion & implication

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Writing course for 2nd year senior high

First batch of students to start writing classes since year 1

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Weekly writing class, 50 minutes each

6 classes of 2nd year high school students

Class includes mixed levels

Divided into half (approx. 22 students)

No grammar

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Sample topic: Should high school students be allowed to do part-time jobs?

A well-known proverb says that “a man is not an island”. When students go to high schools, they learn many things. Many people learn about many things in school, and some people do not learn enough things in school, and it is well-known that there are some things that are not so important to learn and different people learn different things. Communication is important, and this is because it is important to communicate with each

other and no man is an island.

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“CT”

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An analogy from basketball (Fisher, 2001)

  1. Children were first divided into teams
  2. No instructions were given
  3. After the game, coach models proper shooting techniques
  4. Children try again,

this time with

the new technique

  1. Repeat 3 & 4

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Explicit instructions on critical thinking

Meta-analysis of 117 studies by Abrami et. al. (2008) found empirical evidence that explicit instructions has the largest effect

“…critical normally means making sound judgements and claims that meet epistemologically acceptable standards”

—Abrami et. al. (2008)

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Trial and error

up

ground

from the

Building lessons

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Guiding Principles

Fluency over accuracy

Learn a little, use a lot

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Introduction

Conclusion

Body

5-sentence essay

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Logic introduced in curriculum

Cause & effect

    • because

Chain reasoning

A

B

    • If , (S) will

A

B

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time

because

effect

cause

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time

now

Future

cause

effect

will

If

, (S)

Hypothetical scenario

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Peter is hungry

The tree has fallen

The car is broken

The window was smashed

The dog is running

The door is open

The bicycle is broken

Suzy is angry

I passed Eiken

The chair is broken

It is cold in this room

The boy is crying

The laundry is still wet

Susan failed her test

I am sleepy

The room is dark

Tom is upset

Lisa is happy

Sally was late

Bob has no money

The computer is broken

The air-con is off

Billy is sad

The girl is laughing

The teacher is happy

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Logical errors introduced in curriculum

Circular reasoning

No relationship in cause and effect

Cause and effect are reversed

Insufficient explanation

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What’s wrong?

He threw the ball at the window because the window is smashed.

Cause and effect are reversed

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What’s wrong?

Because the batter ran for the first base, the batter hit the ball.

Cause and effect are reversed

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What’s wrong?

I studied English very hard because I am better at English.

Cause and effect are reversed

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What’s wrong?

The rugby player is injured because he cannot play.

Cause and effect are reversed

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What’s wrong?

Fast food is unhealthy

because it is bad for our body.

Circular reasoning

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What’s wrong?

Because it is oily.

No effect mentioned

(a common grammar error

from L1 interference)

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What’s wrong?

It is raining because

the Sakura flowers bloomed.

No relationship

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What’s wrong?

I become poor

because I eat fast food.

Insufficient explanation

No relationship

Chain reasoning

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Chain reasoning

I become poor because I eat fast food.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday,

it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday, it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday, it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday,

it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday,

it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Chain reasoning

Fast food is more expensive than home-cooked food. If I eat fast food everyday,

it will cost me a lot of money. Therefore, I will become poor if I eat fast food everyday.

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Thesis statement

I agree that it is important to learn a foreign language.

Paragraph

First, if I learn a foreign language, I can speak a foreign language. If I can speak a foreign language, I can speak to foreigners. If I do not learn a foreign language, I cannot speak to foreigners. For example, because I speak a foreign language, I can speak to foreigners.

Using extreme examples

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Sample essay:

Do you think it is a good thing for high school students to do part-time jobs?

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Discussion

  • Atkinson (1997) cautioned against teaching CT in ESL and considered CT a social practice
  • Davidson (1998) argued that CT is “something more universally relevant than just a social practice”

“…cultural differences are a strong argument for its explicit introduction” – Davidson (1998)

Recent research tends to support this view (see Lun, Fischer, & Ward, 2010)

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Discussion

  • Pre- & post-CT instructions by Moghaddam & Malekzadeh (2011)
    • Improvements in essays after CT instructions in Iranian ESL students
  • Golpour (2014) found statistical evidence that “higher level critical thinkers” tend to write better
    • Both descriptive & argumentative essays

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Discussion

  • No control group
    • Possible further research?
  • Anecdotal evidence on effectiveness
    • Some students passed Eiken level 2 (英検2級1次試験) despite failing reading & listening sections because of high scores in writing section
  • Importance of CT in current information age

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Thank you

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References

Abrami, P., Bernard, R. M., Borokhovski, E., & Wade, A. (2008). Instructional interventions affecting critical thinking skills and dispositions: A stage 1 meta-analysis. Review of Educational Research, 78(4), 1102–1134. https://doi.org/10.3102/0034654308326084

Atkinson, D. (1997). A critical approach to critical thinking in TESOL. TESOL Quartely, 31, 71–94. https://doi.org/10.2307/3587975

Davidson B. W. (1998). Comments on Dwight Atkinson's "A critical approach to critical thinking in TESOL": A case for critical thinking in the English language classroom. TESOL Quarterly, 32(1), 119123.

Fisher, A. (2001). Critical Thinking: An Introduction. 2nd Ed. Cambridge.

Golpour, F. (2014). Critical thinking and EFL learners' performance on different writing modes. Journal of Pan-Pacific Association of Applied Linguistics, 18(1), 103119.

Lun, V. M., Fischer, R., & Ward, C. (2010). Exploring cultural differences in critical thinking: Is it about my thinking style or the language I speak? Learning and Individual Differences, 20(6), 604616.

Moghaddam, M. M. & Malekzadeh, S. (2011). Improving L2 writing

ability in the light of critical thinking. Theory and Practice in

Language Studies, 1(7), 789797.