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The Solar System.

Does it have a title

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Have you learned about the Solar System?

Is there a opening statement

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Is it written in a series of logic step

Have you ever learned about the solar system? Well there's Mercury,Venus, Earth and 4 more planets dwarfs are Pluto Eris Ceres MakeMake Hawmena 50000 Quarraeur 904B Orcus 90377 Sedna and more but the Sun is a star

There's lots of stars some stars are bigger than the Sun and some stars look like Animals there's 240 moons,1.3 million Asteroids 3.900 Comets and your asking me what is a Comet a Comet is a cosmic snowball of the frozen gases rock and dust it's made of large objects that's ice that orbit the Sun. There’s big eyes the Sun can be fit with 100,000 Earth inside him when the planets orbit the Sun after 5 bil years the Sun will be a red giant. Nebula is a giant cloud and dust and gas in Space there to much so I can’t say all of it.

Space Crafts is a vehicle of device designed for travel of operation and there's Rocket ship you can use to go to the Moon,it will take 3 days to go from the Earth to the Moon. Mars has 2 Moons, 95 Moons for Jupiter, one hundred for Saturn the end.

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My Planets my dwarfs Planets and 1.3 million Asteroids 3.900 Comets telling about Comets and then big eyes.

DO THE STEPS CONTINUE UNTIL THE EXPLANATION ENDS

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There’s Pluto is a dwarf Planet Mercury Venus Earth Mars and 4 more there’s 1.3 million as Asteroids 3.900 Comets. Space crafts is a vehicle of device design for travel

is it written in a simple present tense

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Mercury then it is Venus.

Time connect

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A Nebula is a giant cloud and dust AND gas in space

CASUAL CONNECTIVE

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Intro

Have you learned about the Solar system?

Well there’s Mercury then Venus so it’s Earth and Mars

dwarfs are Pluto Eris Ceres MakeMake Hawmena 500000 Quarreur 904b Orcus 90377 Sedna and more but the Sun is a star.

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Explanation

There’s lots of stars some stars are bigger than the Sun some stars look like an Animal there’s 240 Moons, 1.3 mil Asteroids,3,900 Comets and you’re probably asking me what is a Comet it is a cosmic snowball of frozen gases rock and dust It’s made of large objects that’s ice that orbit the Sun there’s Big eyes the Sun can be fit in 100,000 Earths inside him when the Planets orbit the Sun. After 5 bil years the Sun will become a red giant Scientists think. Nebula is a giant cloud and dust and gas in space there’s a lot of Nebulas so I can’t say it all there

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End

Space Crafts is a vehicle of device designed for travel of operation and there’s Rocket ship you can use to go to the Moon,it will take 3 days for Earth to go to the Moon Mars has 2 moons ninety five Moons for Jupiter one hundred forty 6 for Saturn the end.