Early Reader Request Form for the Janey McCallister Space Station Mystery Series (4 books)
Hello Dear Reader!

I am looking for 10-15 readers for my 4-book series I'm titling the Janey McCallister Space Station Mystery Series. I'm planning to publish starting August 2019 (tentative date), and I'd love your help making this series the best it can be.

I'd like reader feedback (questions below) on a few chapters at a time every 2 weeks. I'll send you your choice Word doc or PDF, and you send them it back with any notes on it or just send back notes in an email.

You're getting pages that I have edited a lot, so your feedback will help me make it even better.

Also, even though all 4 books are written, this editing process is really where I shape and deepen the world, the story, and the characters.

Here’s what I would like you to answer: (Short answers are fine. 🙂 )

1. At what point does the motivation or the actions of the characters seem unrealistic?
2. Where does the story get boring?
3. What was missing? What did you want more of?
4. So, what would make this a five-star story for you?
5. Did you feel attached to the characters?
6. [Optional] Any line edits, like typos and grammar, would be great!

You can answer any or all. All feedback is helpful.

I'd like to send out these approximately 30-40 pages about every 2 weeks, and would love to get your comments back within 7-14 days.

You may spend 1-4 hours reading and making comments for each batch of pages, depending on how fast you are.

I am asking for commitment for reading the whole book, about 3 months time. My goal is to complete one book every ~3 months.

SCHEDULE WITH EARLY READER TEAM (Titles are working titles and subject to change.)

August through October 2017: INTO THE DARK, Book 1
November 2017 through mid-Feb 2018: IRIDESCENCE, Book 2
March through May 2018: GONE GREEN, Book 3
May 31 through August 2018: RED RUNNING DEEP, Book 4

*If you can help me on all four books, that's awesome. But if you can only help on one book, that's fine too! Every little bit of feedback helps.

You get to be a part of shaping the story long before the general public reads the books. You get to help an author. You get to see the story shaping process in action. You'll also get signed copies of the books, as they will be released in print and digital. I will mention you in the Acknowledgements. Also, swag!

There are 4 books in the series. If they sell well, I'll write more.

Each book is about 200-250 pages, maybe a little longer, and designed to be fun, quick reads.

Set on a space station that is a 5-star hotel-casino in high earth orbit about 100 years in the future, each book is a stand-alone murder mystery, with Janey McCallister as the lead investigator. She works on the security staff for the hotel-casino. There is an overarching 4-book story, continuing characters, and a love interest. As soon as I have book blurbs, I'll share them with you.

If this is something you'd like to do, I need ongoing commitment. I need readers who can be part of the early reader team for the long haul, at least for one entire book. I do know that life happens. So let me know if you can't participate as soon as you know, so I'm not waiting on comments from you, or bugging you about them. Thanks in advance!

If you know this is something you'd like to do, then sign up below. By signing up, you'll be starting with Book 1, INTO THE BLACK.

Thank you!

You note them below in the form or email me directly at: bethbarany@gmail.com.

Email address *
Here's some fun stuff for you!
This is fun (and not final) cover of the series I created to inspire me.
Here's how you can join the *secret* Street Team/Early Readers group Facebook group:
I've opened up my Street Team group on Facebook for the Early Readers!


I'm sharing covers and other fun ways to promote this series.

If you'd like to join in, since it's a Secret group, first, friend me at https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=799399464; second, email me that you'd like to join the STREET TEAM, and then I can invite you.

Thank you so much! Your input helps me make better books! (Hello from Rocket and Cinnamon!)
A copy of your responses will be emailed to the address you provided.
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