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What is the tone of your novel? *
OPTIONAL: What is the designing principle of your novel? What is the message you're hoping to convey?

Here is an example from John Truby's Anatomy of Story: A Christmas Carol.

Premise: When three ghosts visit a stingy old man, he regains the spirit of Christmas.

Designing principle: Trace the rebirth of a man by forcing him to view his past, his present and his future over the course of one Christmas Eve.
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OPTIONAL: If you can, please answer the following questions regarding your manuscript, to help me better understand your stakes: 

What does your main POV character want?
Why do they want it?
What's at stake if they don't get it?
What/who stands in their way?
What is the catalyst of your novel? 
What is the first plot point (the "point of no return" that caps your first act) of your novel? 
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