My Love for a Magician (Book 1 & 2)

Hey, I'm planning to edit the whole series of My Love for a Magician which would mean there would be a lot of changes to come and I would like your opinions in other things. So please answer the questions below. Thank you.
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    I'll be starting to edit My Love for a Magician soon and maybe on July or August, I would distribute a copy of it. So watch out for it. For the meantime, I will be distributing 100 soft copies of Waiting for the Magician Special Chapter: Alyssa takes New York on June 1, 2013. Read it here on http://uknowulovemary-stories.blogspot.com/2013/04/waiting-for-magician-special-chapter.html to know how to grab one.