Survey on My Book's Current First Line
I'm writing a book for the University of Pittsburgh tentatively titled, Death Fog: Clean Air and the Tragedy of a Pennsylvania Mill Town. The book explores a smog tragedy in 1948 that killed twenty-one and led directly to the nation's first clean air act. Here is the current first paragraph:

"Helen Stack woke up that morning with a cough and sore throat and thought she must be developing a cold."
Does the first line make you want to read more?
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On a scale of 1 to 5, where 1 is extremely interesting and 5 is not at all interesting, how would you rate how interesting this first line is?
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