Feedback for Melanie Heisey (Ham Nox)

Your observations are extremely valuable and one of the best gifts you could possibly give me. Critical feedback especially, since I know how awkward it is to give sometimes. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what I could be doing better, because that is really how I grow.
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