Article II November Draft Feedback

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October 2022 Full Draft

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Instructions and Overview

This form will close on November 28, after which the Commission will prepare a revised draft for a new round of comment to happen in December.

In what follows, our questions are about the current proposed draft: Article II Draft (Oct 2022)

On the individual sections, we are most interested in specific suggestions for language and wording; this is the feedback that will be most helpful for us at this point in our process. If you had to write this section, what would you have said?

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Suggestion for reading

In the course of our work, we've found the "three reading rule" to be helpful:

First reading: Observe how this makes you feel.

Second reading: Observe what this makes you think.

Third reading: What responses or suggestions do you have for us?

Overall, what does this draft make you feel? What thoughts does it evoke for you?

Purposes Section: If you were voting on this, how likely would you be to vote "yes" for this section?

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Purposes Section: What are your suggestions for this section?

Values and Covenant Section: If you were voting on this, how likely would you be to vote "yes" for this section?

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Values and Covenant Section: What are suggestions for this section?

Inspirations Section: If you were voting on this, how likely would you be to vote "yes" for this section?

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Inspirations Section: What are your suggestions for this section?

Inclusion Section: If you were voting on this, how likely would you be to vote "yes" for this section?

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Inclusion Section: What are your suggestions for this section?

Freedom of Belief Section: If you were voting on this, how likely would you be to vote "yes" for this section?

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Freedom of Belief Section: What are your suggestions for this section?

Overall, what are your responses to this draft?

What other thoughts or questions do you have for the Article II Study Commission?

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