Hi, friend! Thanks for showing interest in beta reading LEON GAINS AND THE EXPEDITION TO THE VOID. Here's the information and form!

INFO: LEON GAINS is a clean middle grade fantasy action/adventure novel. Betas will be sent the manuscript (around 40,000 words) by June 24th. Betas will have three weeks to complete the book and return feedback (deadline: July 15th). I will provide a questionnaire sheet for quick feedback but if betas have additional thoughts, that is welcomed.


When an Undergrounder turns 13, they must view the Above and choose to forget… or remember. Before Leon Gains can reach Decision Day, sickness reaches his peaceful village. Leon must join Gage, a boy who claims to have survived the Above, and go to the Void: where legend says the healing light is locked away.

Thrust into a world of dark tunnels, hungry monsters, unlikely friends, and the possibility that his village has lied to him about the world as he knows it… Leon risks everything for a chance of saving his family. But if the legends are wrong, or if Leon can’t survive the underground, his village will be lost. Can Leon unleash the light, or will he be lost to the darkness?

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