#1. First 50 pages (roughly 10,000 words) critique plus Zoom call (ONLY TWO REMAINING!)
Hereās what you get: You send over your first 50 pages to me. I read it with my editorial eyes, and then we schedule a Zoom call to fit your schedule. Then, we hop on together and gab and gush about it, shape it up and smooth it out, and work to make it oh so hooky! Weāre going to make sure thereās lots of voice, a great sense of time and place, and that it has all that wonderful narrative momentum you want your first 50 pages to have!
Regular cost:Ā $770
Black Friday Deal: 50% off - $385Ā
(Psst. Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve monthly installments?)
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#2. Story Breakthrough Private VIP Day (ONE REMAINING!
Here's what you get:Ā For one full day (8am - 8pm eastern time) you and I will hop on Zoom and work on your story. The characters, plot, voice, pacing, everything. Any where you feel stuck. It's all about getting past a story roadblock FAST. So if there's a WIP you just can't figure out or a third act climax that just isn't working, this VIP is made for you. We'll also do live writing sessions so then you have someone with you to keep you focused and accountable.Ā
A typical schedule can be:
8am - Setting the goal of the day and then assignmentĀ
10am - 30 min Check in with goal, new assignmentĀ
11:30 - Writing Sprint #1Ā
1pm - 30 min Check in with goal, new assignmentĀ
2pm - Writing Sprint #2Ā
4pm - 30 min Check in with goal, new assignmentĀ
6pm - Drafting Over Dinner Writing Sprint #3Ā
8pm - Final Check in and review of the dayĀ
Once the VIP Day is complete, you'll then have a week to send me your first 30 pages for me to review. On page markups will be included as well as an editorial letter.
Black Friday Deal: $% off - $2160
(Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve month installments?)
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#3. 2 Round Query Critique (ONLY TWO REMAINING!)
Hereās what you get: A full read of your query where I go over the readability, logic, clarity, engagement and fun factor of your query. Once you revise, I'll read it again. On page markups are included.
Regular cost: $450
Black Friday Deal: $75% off - $111
(Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve month installments?)
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#4. My FAMED Story Roadmap! (ONLY TWO REMAINING!)
Hereās what you get: Two 75 minute sessions where you and I will talk over Zoom and build out a detailed Story Roadmap for your book. Think of it like the ultimate outline! I'll ask you a TON of questions so we can really deep dive on your characters, plot, themes, and story journey. As you answer, I'll be doing the typing. You'll see in real time your story take shape!
By the end, youāll have a strong story framework, a clear vision for where your plot is headed, and the confidence to start writing with purpose. Plus you'll save days, weeks, or even months of time just spinning your wheels trying to figure it out on your own.Ā
Regular cost: $2000
Black Friday Deal: $40% off - $1200
(Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve month installments?)
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#5. Straight Up Just Tell Me Manuscript Edit (ONLY ONE REMAINING!)
Hereās what you get: A full read of your full manuscript where I go over the readability, logic, clarity, engagement and fun factor of your your story. Then, we'll have an EPIC Zoom call to discuss how to strengthen core elements and build a personalized editorial roadmap. Perfect if you want to query in the New Year!
Black Friday Deal: 20% off final quoted price
(Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve month installments?)
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#6. š„ NEW! Author Coach Strategy Session š„ (ONLY TWO REMAINING!)
Hereās what you get: You and I will sit down over Zoom for one hour and discuss ALLLLL of your questions and concerns about being an author right now and heading into 2026. We can talk strategy, how to repackage your stories, build a query plan, and anything else you want to go over. We can also just talk about your fears, frustrations, or worries you have as a writer in this world right now. And then we'll create a solid step-by-step plan so you can clearly and confidently go after one of your goals.Ā You'll receive the replay and transcript.
Regular cost: $499
Black Friday Deal: 50% off - $249
(Did you know if you use Paypal, you may be eligible to break up your payments into six or even twelve month installments?)
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If you'd like a more extensive, intensive experience, please visit the Books Before Birthday mentorship page by clicking here.
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