Passage A:


lukrov lifted Chizuru's upper body carefully and placed some pillows behind her back so that she could sit up, and after a while the weight she had felt all over her body eased, Chizuru let out a sigh of relief, but as expected, it was still difficult to move.

"I think the blood you lost hasn't recovered yet'

Lukrov spoek while looking into Chizuru's eyes.

"You'll have to stay in your bed for at least several more days. Let me know if you get tired, I' ll put you to sleep."

"Yeah...."



Being able to sit upright, she was able to look at Lukrov straight in the eye.

The face of the large knight approaching her closely was breathtaking, and the shadows under his eyes from lack of sleep did nothing but to increase his attractiveness. His masculine jawline, chiseled features, jet-black eyes, and overflowing vitality.

Chizuru couldn't help but feel her heart flutter when she faced him.

'I don't think I'll ever get used to it,......'

Perhaps Chizuru will be bewildered by Lukrov's charm for the rest of her life. Every move he makes makes her heart skip a beat, every touch makes her tremble with joy, and every smile makes her the happiest woman in the world.

A lifetime spent with him.

It sounded like a very good looking idea.




Passage B:



Chizuru got back to her sense and shook off Lukrov's hand and ran away.

 She ran through the corridor with such a force that she didn't even know she could run so fast

when she entered the Kitchen, she head straight to the small door leading to the outside.

She was suffocated and wanted to breathe the outside air.

It doesn't matter if it rain She felt that it was even better

She wanted to wash away the tears that were about to overflow when She gets wet under the rain.

The thick wooden door was only opened from the inside and when chizuru pushed it up by force it opened easily, and she was able to go outside.

The rain at night was stronger than she expected, and the cold wind that pierced her skin was blowing strongly.



Note: Please keep in mind to do all the required fixes in the passage, rephrasing, tenses, etc