Austin Slade

Dr. Spenser

English 375

15 October 2012

Peer Review for Mikelle Nelson’s Masculinity in the Victorian Period

Bibliography:

Make sure to get a couple of more sources, even though it seems like you have plenty of information in your overview.

Remember, it is an annotated bibliography.  So be sure to include two to three sentences after each entry.  The annotation can be as simple as explaining what the author is talking about in once sentence and then explain how it will help you with your project in the next sentence.

Overview:

Recommended changes: 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence – “The Victorian Period is often . . . “

3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence – “. . . proceeding the Victorian Period . . .”

4th paragraph, fragment in parenthesis – you might decide to use hyphens or dashes because, at least for me, parenthesis seem to not get read – i.e. in text citations.

5th paragraph, 2nd sentence – “. . . caused many political and social . . .” A lot seems informal.

6th paragraph, 6th sentence – after the article’s title, you have quotation marks.

Blog:

Haha, alright, so I realize that you have yet to include your content to your blog, but it really looks good.  The picture goes well with the blog title.  What are you thinking as far as how to include it on the blog?  Are you planning on just plopping it all on there?  If I may, I suggest that you include tabs at the top.  Under each tab, you could include each part of the project: Quote explications, annotated bibliography, even the overview.