Purpose: since this is an analytical essay,

your purpose will be

EX: To be effective, you will need to

share intelligent (deep) ideas

support your ideas with proof from the novel

Keep your purpose in mind, but do not directly

write it in your paper!

Thesis statement

your thesis statement will be:

a subject and an overall opinion (commentary) for the eassy

the heart of  your essay- everything in the essay must

support and add to this at the end of your intro paragraph

subject+commentary= the thseies statement

TERMS

Review terms

engaging opeing

topic sentence

closing sentence\final thought

New terms

commentary

conceret details

CONCERT DETAILS

suppot the thesis

specific details from the literature

goldilocks entered the three

bears house without their

permission

English 10 cite each CD with a

page number

facts

specifics

examples

descripition

illustrations

support

proof

evidence

quotations

paraphrasing

plot refences

COMMENTARY

your opinion or comment about something

not concert details

goldilocks dose not respect the privacy

of other

 do not

be repetitve

re exapin

summarize

opinion insight

analysis

interpertaion

inference

personal response

feeling

evalutaion

explication

reflection

SOURCE

website book or other place were ytou got your imfoemation

you mst write down the name of the source

 each tie you use information that come from

somewere else

EX: gene reagred finny as a charismatic y

young man who could shine with every one

Bad words

frist person

i me my we us our

second person

you your

perachy

would could should need to

wimpy

may might prerbably

 ORGANIZE YOU PARAGRAPH

introduction body body body body \

conclusion introduction paragraph

enging opening

commentary

thesis

BODY PARAGRAPH

topic sentence

concertere details

commentary analying

commaertay anaalying

concert deatails

commenary ananlying

CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH

First sentence of commentary (theme related)

Commentary

Final thought