What happened?  List actions in chronological order.

1. 2nd quarter of my football game.

2. ran in to make a tackle.

3. When head to head with a player on the other time.

4. Blacked-out, was dizzy, felt sick, forgot what happened after all that.

English 9 only needs three steps.

Where did it happen?    Describe the setting.

• city and state: Escondido, CA
• building: Football field
• room: “”
• furniture:””

Who was involved?  List and describe the characters present.

you

• appearance: In Dragon football uniform
• actions: Mad and upset about the pain of the concussion
• speech: Didn’t say much

character A: Athletic Dr.

• appearance: Wear a white shirt, was about my height
• actions: He ran to see if I was okay when I started to fall
• speech: Asked a lot of questions to make sure that my concussion wasn’t to bad  

character B: Coach Woods

• appearance: Short male, with the Dragon Blue coach uniform on.
• actions: Ran out to the field to grab me before I hit the ground. Was the 1st person out there to help me.
• speech: He asked me if I was okay and talked the though it.

When did it happen? Explain how long ago it took place.

• year: 2010
• month and/or season: October
• time of day: night
• your age: 16

Why did you select this event?

• I selected this, because... It impacted cause I ever had something like that happen to me. If I would have closed my eye and went to sleep it could have be near death.

How did it change you?

• At first I __didn’t really think about what can happen when I play football__, but afterward I__started to think about the things that can happen___.  I realized __that sports can be dangerous and before you play them you need to know the dangers ___.