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Title

Stranger Danger

Reveal

(orientation)

  • Josh's family goes to the playground with their son to have some fun.

Events

First ‘Josh’ was playing in a playground and a old man offers him candy

Next Josh says “no thank you i do not know you” and the man goes and chases Josh

Lastly the kid runs to his parents and tells them everything about the man and the mum tells the police to get him.

Ending

Then the police caught him and put him in jail for 12 years.

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Josh and his parents walked to the playground to have fun. Josh's parents go to get his soccer ball in the car but then an old man in a black hoodie approaches josh and offers him some candy in return he would go to the bushes over there where people cannot see them. But josh remembered what his parents told him, if a stranger comes up to you and offers you candy shout stranger danger as loud as you can.He then shouts stranger danger as loud as he could but as he does that the old man quickly! pulled josh by the arm the old man took him in the bushes and tied him up at that point josh was screaming for his life then josh’s parents were coming back to the park when they came back josh was nowhere to be seen but then the parents here a familiar sound it was there son screaming Stranger danger! Stranger danger! Stranger danger! Then dad realised it was their son. The  parents worried following the scream to find an old man with Josh in a bush with rope around Josh's arms and legs so he couldn't run away as soon as the parents saw. Dad pushed the old man to the ground and picked up josh and ran back to the car meanwhile mum was calling the police and then they arrested the old man for kidnaping the old man he got 12 years in prison.