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My Writing goal (from your Goals slideshow): 14 |
My style of writing: Story |
Planning/Thought Shower:there's a little girl who read those books A dog with a scarf they see a whale out of the stars They stack snow The constallation |
Chapter 1 the anger inside
I woke to a wet lick on my nose and we all knew who did that. “STOP LICKING MY NOSE!” “Woof!” barked Fangs. “Oh right, nevermind. Sorry are you trying to tell me something?” I gradually walked down the stairs ‘Sorry kiddo Dad’ said and smirked when I opened the fridge WHAT! Where's my honeynut cheerio’s? Sorry your sister ate them all grrr I felt anger inside about to burst out but I forgot until now my secret stash. I walked to my room check under the bed until ‘AAAAAHHHHH MOMMY!’ ‘oh no she found out’ whispered mum to dad ‘I was cleaning yesterday until I found them so I didn’t want them to go to waste’. THAT'S IT I'M GOING TO THE MOUTAIN! As I slammed the door in a I hate you all expression. ‘Come on Fangs’ Fang follows from behind.
Chapter 2 the worst thing that could happen
Just me and Fangs my pet dog I thought in my head until I got brushed by a cold misty wind aaahhhh! I screamed ‘That's too cold’ I felt kinda scared I thought again would I freeze to death halfway up the mountain? No, I dont think so. After about 30 minutes we finally reached the top and I was Freezing but it was all worth it when I saw it. ‘WHAT!’ I said as I jumped back It's real when I saw it only me no one else wow! Just there it was I saw a whale out of the stars a constallation ‘It's buttieful I exclaimed but then then worst thing happened when your climbing mountain I slipped and fell halfway down the mountain. I tried to run but I was sinking into the snow and I had to turn back. I run but not very fast. On the other hand, fangs ran down with no trouble and I looked behind and it striked me. Just me frozen on the spot unable to move and an avalanche rushing towards me I got tugged by a little pull it was fangs he started to pull and pull but no use then he started to sink and in a few seconds we were completely covered in snow. Finally I woke up from a horrible nightmare.
Chapter 3 all over again but slightly different
I woke to a wet nose. I just ignored it then my alarm clock rang. I pressed snooze then I finally got up after an hour or two. I was so tired from not sleeping after the nightmare. I didn’t sleep all night but everything has a price to pay so I just ate raw sugar and that woke me right up. My honeynut cheerio’s were still gone and so was my stash but I knew that would happen. We went hiking up the mountain me well I was to afraid of the nightmare I didn’t go and well let's say it got pretty lonely I was just watching the time waiting and waiting until in my head I thought what if their in an avalanche what if they need my help what if their in trouble I BURSTED out the door and bolted for the mountain and tried to climb but I didn’t have my hiking gear suddenly BOOM! Something fell from the mountain and it was moving I approached it with caution and it jumped at me.
Chaper 4 fangs dig deep
But to my surprising it was fangs and he started to dig didn’t know what was he doing but I think it's just a dog intinct suddenly he stopped and pulled something out is was… A dead stick it had been frozen for about 3 days I was surprised the fangs could do that so we walked back home. We saw mum and dad and I was really glad to see them. They were looking for me “Sophie, where are you?” I snuck into my bedroom and pretended to be asleep and acauly fell asleep in the process. I had the same dream again or nightmare.
Chapter 5 The humiliation and frustration I had school today but you dont want to hear me getting ready. It's pretty boring so I will spare you the time. I was at school and I saw my friends. I thought in my head should I tell them?
“yeah I will hey guys” I was hiking yesterday and my dog fell from half way but they were laughing at me before I could tell the rest and told the whole school and I was embarrassed when I got home I was crying because of the humiliation I was crying the whole day.
Chapter 6 The frenzy of lies
I felt something inside it wasn’t sadness it was something else it was anger and anger I couldn’t control. The next day I lied to the teachers and told them they beat me up and we all got in trouble. They were Glaring at me because I lied and got them suspended for 3 days. I was a bit happy and a bit angry but mostly happy. But it wasn’t just them remember how I tolf you they told the whole school? Well they did, everyone knew I was insane and a liar.
Chapter 7 Kindness and Hate
Atleast some people have pity on me and were really nice some on the other hand were really mean and just discausting behaviour but I liked the others that showed kindness and pity see how weird my school is I have some weird friends to. I was a grade 4 so I didn’t get that much homework so I didn’t do it and later that was a bummer that I didn’t. now I'm busy doing it soon time passed by and I dropped my eyes over and over again