Personal Project Report - First Draft Feedback

Personal Project Strands Explained!


Criterion A - Investigation

Supervisor Comments

i. define a clear goal and global context for the project, based on personal interests

ii. identify prior learning and subject-specific knowledge relevant to the project

iii. demonstrate research skills.

Criterion B - Planning

Supervisor Comments

i. develop criteria for the product/outcome

ii. plan and record the development process of the project

Iii. demonstrate self-management skills.

Criterion C - Taking Action

Supervisor Comments

i. create a product/outcome in response to the goal, global context and criteria

ii. demonstrate thinking skills

Iii. demonstrate communication and social skills.

Criterion D - Reflecting

Supervisor Comments

i. evaluate the quality of the product/outcome against their criteria

ii. reflect on how completing the project has extended their knowledge and understanding of the topic and the global context

iii. reflect on their development as IB learners through the project.

Academic Honesty

Supervisor Comments

Does the student use in text-citations that link correctly to the work cited page?

The student has included a bibliography of works cited using MLA 8th edition?

(They may wish to have a full bibliography in their Process Journal - they are welcome to use this as an appendix - however, they should have just a bibliography of works cited for the report).

Has the student shown their research throughout the report?


Supervisor Comments

Does the students cover sheet include; Student Name, School Name, Supervisor Name, Project Title, Summary of Project Goal, Global Context and Word Count?

Does the student follow the correct format for the report? (Four clear sections, one for each criterion, in-text citations, MLA8)

Has the student linked their Global Context throughout the report?

Has the student selected 10 entries, (one page each) from their process journal to support their report?

Has the student uploaded five photographs/screenshots or 30 second video which best show the quality of the final product?

Anything else?