About me - Writing

Walt: write for our blog audience

Walt: choose interesting content and vocabulary

Walt: be cybersmart

Plan

Greeting:

Welcome your audience

Hello, Kia ora, Talofa... 

Kia ora

Who are you?

First Name/ Year/ Teachers

My name is Tatiana. I'm in Year 4. My teacher is Mrs  Moala

Interests

I enjoy..., I like..., My favourite...

I enjoy playing with my friend. I like helping other people. My favourite thing is doing space.

Sports/ Hobbies

I play..., On the weekend...,

My cousin plays rugby. On the weekend I went to my cousin's house and we were fighting at each other. My cousin's name is Makea.

Other

Anything else?

I shared my chocolats with all my cousins at my house. We had a lot of fun playing hide and seek.

Check your ideas. Are they ok to share with EVERYONE in the world?

Final copy for blog

Checklist:

  • I have welcomed my audience and the blurb represents me!
  • This can be shared with everyone in the world (cybersmart).
  • It is unique (different from my classmates’ blurbs).
  • It is short and sharp.
  • I have started sentences in different ways.
  • I have used full stops, capital letters, commas, etc.
  • I have had a buddy read over it.
  • I am ready to have it checked before it goes onto my blog!