The Deep

Story starter!

He was having such a fabulous time just calmly swimming along through the warm, blue water. Little did he know, something was lurking just beneath him snap he was gone.    

Question time!

What creature can you see in the picture?shark  How many people can you see?2 How do you think the person in the picture is feeling?  happy  What might happen next?it will bite his head off   What other creatures might live in the ocean nearby? fish 

Perfect picture!

Look carefully at the photograph and imagine you could zoom out. What might be happening just underneath the shark/beside the man/close to them in the water? Write or draw what you think!

Sentence challenge!

Using your senses is a great way to make your writing exciting! Imagine you could hear what was happening in this picture. Which 'sounds' words would describe what was happening?screaming (eg. splash,

gurgle...) Imagine you could feel the water and the whale.feels like sandpaper What describing words would tell the reader what they both feel like?

Sick sentences!

These sentences are ‘sick' and need help to get better. Can you help? You might be able to use some of the words you have thought of for number 1!

► The man was swimming next to the massive whale shark

next to the big fish.

The big fish was swimming in the sea.