WALHT sum up our writing (conclusion)
Success Criteria | Self Assessment |
Read your entire piece of writing | 😀😀😀 |
Sum it up | 😀😀😀 |
Write an I think or I wonder statement | 😀😀😀 |
How are Black holes  Formed?
Have you ever wondered how a black hole is formed?well this text will tell you about that.
 a black hole is formed when a star explodesAnd the core of the star runs out of gas . thenA mini black hole About the size of a coin is formed inside of the star. The mini black hole eats up the  remains of the star.It releases more energy than the sun can produce . Anything which  goes too close could be sucked  into it unless it's speeding at the travel of light .a  Bigger black hole can suck up smaller Black holes.
The main ideas in this text is Black holes
,stars and
 the sun.
I wonder what gravity is
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Feedback - Well done Emma on strengthening and adding in a conclusion. You have followed your success criteria well.
Feedforward - It would help if this piece also had a strong introduction. You can do this by adding a rhetorical question to begin and then tell the reader what the writing will be about (preview).