Recount Writing

What are we learning?

We are learning to write a story in the right order

Success Criteria:

You know you have been successful when you have written about:

Who?	Yes!
What?	Yes!
Where?	Yes!
You have a beginning , middle and end.	Yes!

Remember to:

Plan your writing.
Use full stops, capital letters and paragraphs.
If you cannot spell a word don’t worry! We can fix it up later.

I opened my eyes, the sun shining through my bedroom window and

I say: “yessssss! “It’s finally wednesday it’s maara kai day and Master chef”!!!!!!! I got out of bed and rushed to get my clothes and I quickly dressed up in my school uniform and I ate breakfast very fast. Then I told my dad to drive me to school. As soon as I got into the classroom I was SUPER excited I couldn't even be patient. After we brainstormed our ideas we got to work.

Our teacher Mrs McMillan split us into groups, and the groups are:

Cob loaf Irelyn, Billie Mae, Charlotte, Olivia, Amelia P.

Spaghetti Kerah, Isabella, Yumi, Stella, Jakob R, Jacob SF.

Apple crumble Jakob A, Rylee, Thomas, Braden, Ethaniel.

Peach smoothie Santino, Jethro, Seb, Hunter, Kyran, Pinqi.

Mr H came in when everyone was cooking and my group was still on the mat playing with lego. Mrs McMillan finally gave us a job, our job was to take out the middle of the loaf. After we did that job Mrs McMillan told Mr H to get some chives for the cob loaf group.

Finally our group went to the staff room, and we had all the ingredients ready for us. Pinqi, Jethro and Seb were cutting the Bananas into little pieces, Santino, Hunter and Mr H were opening the can of Peaches. After everyone was finished preparing the food, we placed all the ingredients into the blender then we mixed everything together.

We poured the smoothie into the smiley cups for our class to taste test the smoothie, the Peach smoothie was SUPER YUMMY. After morning tea the Judges came in, Charlotte and Irelyn were telling the Judges about the Cob loaf, Spaghetti, Apple crumble and Peach smoothie, and where we got the ingredients and How we made them. Then it was the tasting time, first they

ate the Cob loaf then the Spaghetti, Apple crumble and Peach smoothie, they loved everything, But they said the Apple crumble was the best!!!!!

After the Judges left, we started to eat everything first we

ate the Cob loaf then the Spaghetti and last the Apple crumble I felt like I was going to POP like a BALLOON. I can’t wait till we do the next Maara kai!!!