WALT: write an amazing hook that will capture my audiences interest.        

SC: I will have

I look to my left.  Dad was absolutely petrified.  His hands were gripping the belt. It was pointless even trying to talk to him.  Eyes shut tight, you could say he was turning green.  Can you guess what we’re doing?

The engines roaring, and the plane is racing down the runway.  We’re about to fly across the big vast ocean.