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Title

ZOMBIES!!

Reveal

(orientation)

  • We were running from the zombies behind them.
  • We hid in the basement until all of the zombies were gone.
  • We ran out of the house to find a vehicle.
  •  We locked all the doors and windows.

Events  

Event 1

  • We found bikes for us to ride but the zombie catched Billy Bob’s leg so he died.
  • We found bikes but 1 bike ran out of petrol so Sahil went with James         to double up on the bike.
  • We found a bike but Lee did not know how to drive a bike, so she had to ride with Kim.
  • We found bikes but Sahil wanted to stay home because he did not want to leave his pokemon at home so we stayed home and waited for a signal from any survivors.
  • We found bikes and tried to find survivors

Event 2

  • We were next to a cliff and Sah vil was not holding onto Patricia, so he fell off the cliff.
  • We got a signal from a survivor but then zombies got into the house so we had to run out of the house.
  • They found a survivor next to a gas station so he hopped on with Billy Bob.

Event 3

  • The survivor had a bite from a zombie so he hides his bite with his shirt.
  • They got off the bikes to get in the helicopter to find safety.
  • We got off the bikes and said goodbye to sahil because we could not save him, we found an abandoned base with supplies so we stayed there until safety came.

Ending

  • We're in a military base, but we are still in fear.
  • James enjoyed it because he got to safety. James did well on knowing how to ride a bike. James needs to improve on communicating to his family.

Recount draft

Tittle

We hid in the basement until the zombies were gone. “Sahil Don't go out of the basement or else the zombies will eat you.” we yelled.

We went out of the basement to check if it was cleared to get out of the basement. We went outside to find supplies for the basement. Dad brought board games so we were not bored. We then put our supplies in the basement and went off on our bikes to find any survivors. Then a zombie catched dad's leg so we had to leave him behind. “It's ok Kim don't cry,” we said, trying to calm Kim down.

Patty my mum saw survivors but Sahil and my bike ran out of petrol so we doubled up with Mom and Lee. “That means we don't have enough space for the survivors,” said mum.

We will come back for them later. So we went home.

        We were hungry so we ate and filled up the bikes.

“Mum, were we supposed to pick up the survivors from their hideout,?” I said.

“Oh yea lets go then to bring them to our hideout. “We made it,” said Sahil.

              “Mum, look he has a zombie bite RUN” I said. We ran but he caught Kim's leg so he                                    died.    ”Noooooo”I said in tears.

We hopped on our bikes and found a military base full of people so we stayed there with them to be safe. We are finally safe but we are still living in fear.