WHAT IS GOOD AND WHAT IS BAD?

I found the best element of the video was the black and white filter on the narrative, it really conveyed the theme. I also like the repetitiveness in what she does, it shows how she doesn't know anything else other than what she does for her husband.  It becomes more obvious that she may not want to do that any more as the video goes on. The black and white filter is more clear on what it represents as you get to the end of the video and I think it is well shown. Another thing I liked was the start of the video where it comes in with her sighing and then goes into a similar clip in which the video ends with which I think ties the video nicely together. The use of mise-en-scene is also very effective especially in the narrative her outfit really represents the theme.

What to work on? It may be nice to have some quick clips on the beat at the start after she sighs  instead of a black screen; these could be the location of the narrative. By doing this it could add a preview into the rest of the video. I also think the performance could include some different angles, from the sides, above or below,  just to add some variety into the performance. I also think the clip of the close up of her eyes when it looks like she has been crying could be longer or there could be more added clips showing her emotion on how she is feeling. Apart from that it is really good music.