Two Truths and One Lie

WALT: create a recount using descriptive language.

Instructions:

You are going to create a recount about the immersion assembly that we had as a school today. You will need to pick two of your favourite parts of the assembly and recount those in a paragraph. Then you will need to make up something that didn’t actually happen or change an event that happened at assembly. You can then put them in any order in your recount. Use the template below to help you.

Introduction: Orientation

  • Who?
  • What?
  • Where?
  •  When?
  •  Why?
  •  How?

On Monday 23rd July we had an immersion assembly where we found out our new topic is called move ya’ body. I am writing a recount with a twist. The twist is that there will be two truths and one lie in my paragraphs. You the person reading it will need to guess which ones are the truth and which one is a lie.

Paragraph 1: Truth or Lie?

  • Recount in the order that it happened.
  • Who does it involve?
  • What was it?

At the hall when everyone else was ready we were like where's  Mr burt. So then everyone waited when all of a sudden he showed up out of no where. And he was dancing to Beyonces song.Also he told all of us to join so then we all started to join.But it took me 10 seconds to join.Because I was really really SHY.

Paragraph 2: Truth or Lie?

  • Recount in the order that it happened.
  • Who does it involve?
  • What was it?

At the hall when everyone was ready Mr burt came out of no where and started to dance to beyonce's song.Then he told everyone else to stand up and dance to .So then we all started to join him with the prefects.

Paragraph 3: Truth or Lie?

  • Recount in the order that it happened.
  • Who does it involve?
  • What was it?

But also Mr burt was trying to dress up as beyonce  with big curly hair it was also really bushy.So then when we all finished dancing to beyonces song we all had to sit back down.Then the IMMERSION ASSEMBLY Mrs hurre and her friend had to dance too and they were really good dancers.

Conclusion:

  • Summing up your ideas
  • Add in your personal feelings here.

Then we all finished the Immersion assembly.Everyone went off back to class with there new teachers well only some classes got new teachers.Can you guest which one is a lie.

Make sure to proofread your work once you have finished.

Does it make sense?

Are there any spelling mistakes?