WALHT add detail

Success Criteria	Self Assessment
Use adjectives to describe
Use powerful verbs
Use adverbs (ly words)

Today I woke up and it was noisy because it was Easter and I was excited to eat Chocolate and have a Easter hunt. That's how we celebrate here.

Then we had singing and praying even my grandma shared a bible verse for us then we had food. The food was wonderful . That's how normally we celebrate in tonga as our respect for Jesus died on the gross to wipe away our sins.