My time in the water recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
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Intro | Body Paragraph 1 | Body Paragraph 2 | Body Paragraph 3 | Conclusion |
A moment when I was in the water was when…. This one time I went swimming with my family and…. | First… It all started when…. | Then… After that… Next thing I knew... | Finally… At the end of it all… Lastly... | Overall I… It was such a fun day and I’ll never forget it. It was possibly the best day ever. |
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Body Paragraph 1 In the beginning | Body Paragraph 2 In the middle | Body Paragraph 3 At the end |
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> This one time I went swimming with my family and I jumped in the water It was cold. First I was in the water looking at the sand underwater I saw a rocky shores and a inland. Next thing I knew my dad was on the sand he was going to the water. We went underwater to see some carbs. We saw a big carb my dad got it and put it at are camp. Finally I was look a the big carb I went to the water with a cup I fill it up and I went back to the camp I put the carb in the cup he like it so I went back to the water. It was possibly the best day of my life.
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Labels: Writing 2021, Recount.