WALHT: structure our writing

Success Criteria

Self-assessment

I will use some of these to help introduce my report

  • Rhetorical question
  • Fact
  • A summary of what the report will discuss

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I will use my plan to write the body of text

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I will use some of these to help me write a conclusion

  • My thoughts
  • Emotive language

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African Lion

Have you ever wondered if African lions

exist? Did you know they eat the same

amount of food as 70 cans of cat food?

Read on to find out more amazing facts!

Classification

African Lions are warm-blooded mammals. They’re

also called King of the Jungle. The scientific name

is Panthera leo. 

Appearance

African lions have powerful legs that hold it up.

They also have a golden coat. The golden coat is

 really like gold. They also have compact bodies.

Diet

African lions are carnivores and they eat meat.

Males eat 7kgs a day. Females eat 4.5kgs a day

African lions hunt when they’re not hungry.

Habitat

African lions live in west Africa. They also live in

grasslands and savannas.   

I think African lions are great. It would be a tremendous loss if Lions became extinct.

Feedback - Incredible Luke! You have grasped the structure of report writing.

Feedback Can you extend your conclusion to add emotive language such as …

It would be a tremendous loss if Lions became extinct.

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