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I will use some of these to help me write a conclusion
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African Lion
Have you ever wondered if African lions
exist? Did you know they eat the same
amount of food as 70 cans of cat food?
Read on to find out more amazing facts!
Classification
African Lions are warm-blooded mammals. They’re
also called King of the Jungle. The scientific name
is Panthera leo.Â
Appearance
African lions have powerful legs that hold it up.
They also have a golden coat. The golden coat is
 really like gold. They also have compact bodies.
Diet
African lions are carnivores and they eat meat.
Males eat 7kgs a day. Females eat 4.5kgs a day
African lions hunt when they’re not hungry.
Habitat
African lions live in west Africa. They also live in
grasslands and savannas. Â Â
I think African lions are great. It would be a tremendous loss if Lions became extinct.
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It would be a tremendous loss if Lions became extinct.
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