We are learning how to extend our ideas
Success Criteria | Self Assessment |
I will look at the first part of my plan | πππ |
I will write at least 3 sentences saying what my body did | πππ |
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I will write at least 3 sentences saying what my body did | πππ |
I will do the same for the last part of my plan | πππ |
On the holiday I went to a small town called Waihi which was 4 hours away.I Β bring my ipad in the car we have a land rover it has a v8 engine i sat at the front of the car i had a sleep when i woke up we were in waihi!! I was Excited.when
I got to see my Cousins they had Four wheelers and I got to ride on the Four wheelers it was fun i had 3 Β turns around the House after I had a sleep-ZZZ.
They Β had a tree-House i got to play on it i got to eat up on the tree-House it was a sunny day we went
To the Beach i went in the water we went back to the house.we had Lunch the 2 to last day at waihi Arrived
It was Intense played on my Nintendo switch And my iPad With my cousins After that we went to the supermarket
To Get food.it was the last day at waihi we went to the Beach to eat fish & chips we went to bed early so we weren't
Tired to get to gisborne.
When we woke up to go to Gisborne I was Excited! But sad at the same time I had another sleep. When you got back to Gisborne I did stuff at home.I was about to go to my Mums House I was excited to tell my mum everything I didn't Waihi .Β It was hard coming all of the things to Waihi and back to Gisborne We got the Gisborne I was so happy! After a week school started I was nervous.
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Feedback - Wow Adrian you have done a superb job of extending your ideas! This is the most I have seen you write and you have added some extra detail which helps me understand. It sounds like you had a wonderful holiday in Waihi.
Feedforward - there is a spelling word you can add to your home learning. I have made it bold for you.