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TREASURE HUNT!

Hawaii: I would go surfing and look at all the colourful birds, I would go shopping and get lots of hawaian souvenirs. Disneyland: I would go see disney characters and go on rides, I would also get more souvenirs.

Sanfrancisco: I would drive over the golden gate bridge, I would go sight seeing and get more souvenirs. The puppy is Flo my parents friends little french bulldog. I love him and I would love to spend the holiday with him.

I also would love to go to a candy store and get my favourite lollie!

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