Speeches 2018                  

Name:Jett                                                        Date:28.8.18

Topic: I wonder if you can ever make up your mind of what you want to do have plans but your but you need more people because your friends said no well i can solve that now turn on your ears and double check because if you dont i can't help you when your done keep your eyes on me yes i'm talking to you you and  you now listen very very closely

 

First you should try looking for some people who are bored alone and if your lucky they might ask before you do or you can join a game now if you don't like it that's fine but i think even if you don't like it ask because you could get better then before

Now if you are going to join make sure who you’re joining is not mean or bossy. But also make sure you’re not mean rude bossy or anything that no one likes and never cheat or be the one to ruin it this is very important and also no one likes a cheater.

Now if you want to do something by yourself try think of something you like to do maybe do that in real life like maybe a game you play.  Or if you can’t think at all go to the the library and read a book now if you don't like reading you should still go to the library because there is a lot of fantastic books.

In conclusion i think you should try some of these idea and also im not forcing you to do it im just giving you ideas.  

Structure (each criteria is scored out of 10)                         Marks

My introduction is interesting and engages the audience

7

My ideas are well organised, relevant, interesting and compelling (makes the audience want to believe me).

6

Conclusion is effective and complete

7

Voice                                                            

I speak clearly and can be easily heard

7

I vary my pace (how quickly or slowly I speak) and pause to get my meaning across

6

I change my voice for meaning and audience attention

6

Audience interaction                                                           

I appear confident and relaxed

7

I show some energy and enthusiasm

6

I am developing eye contact with the whole audience

7

I use appropriate stance and gestures

6

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Teacher comment

You have written a good speech, I liked your beginning. Your use of hand movements was really good. The way you emphasised different words showed that they were important, well done. I really liked the way you added some humour and asked questions. You used some joining phrases well.

Vary the tone of your voice, and make sure you speak up loud and clear so everyone can hear your ideas because they are worth listening to.

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