(Pineclones)
by
(Aalyan Ali)
(Based on, A True Story)
FADE IN:
AALYAN and SAM are first introduced having normal conversation over text. AALYAN is a 16 year old asian male teen, with brown skin and 5ft9, SAM is a white 16 year old male who is 6ft tall. BEN is also 16 years old but is the most immature out of the lot as well as being the shortest out of the lot..
EXT. MOORS - DAY
Aalyan , Ben and Sam leave the car and retrieve there belongings from the boot of the car ,Aalyan picks up his tent and instantly grunts due to the weight, Ben and Sam their bags and they start the walk to the camping spot which is in the woods.
EXT. WOODS - DUSK
As they arrive the boys throw their camping gear down and start taking photos of the sunset on their phones.
AALYAN
Does anyone else have no service up here?
BEN
Wait thats weird I don't either.
SAM
No I don’t as well ,thats well weird I've never not had signal up here.
They start to become a little suspicious due to the lack of signal, and become more vigilant whilst unpacking the tent. Aalyan and Sam unpack the tent whilst Ben is being useless and walking around and kicking pinecones.
SAM
BEN get the over here and help set the tent up, stop messing about.
AALYAN
Init become helpful for once , you took cadets , you should be good at this type stuff.
SAM
Yeah come hold that side and help feed through the tent pole, then get the pegs.
Ben reluctantly grabs the pole with one hand whilst gripping the tent and slowly feeds through the pole to SAM. As this is happening a pinecone suddenly hits BEN on the head.
2.
BEN
AHHHH ..Which of you dickheads
threw that.
AALYAN
Threw what?!
Ben picks up the pinecone.
BEN
This fucking pineapple.
SAM
Its a pinecone not a pineapple .
And it wasn't either of us (looks
at AALYAN) as we were holding the
tent.
Suddenly movement is heard from the bushes above the hill. Ben runs to have look and sees nothing and blames it on the wind.
AALYAN
What was that then? , I swear i
heard people..
SAM
Yeah I am sure I heard foot steps.
BEN
Nah i doubt it , think it was just a gust of wind that blew the pinecone off the tree, and it must of just been the bushes rubbing against each other just then.
The three of them finish putting up the tent as the sun finally sets.
CUT TO:
INT . TENT - NIGHT
Sam , Ben and Aalyan are all a bit tipsy in the tent as night sets.
Light footsteps and the shuffling of stones and leaves are heard around the tent.
BEN
Anyone want ano…
BEN is cut off by AALYAN
2.
AALYAN
Shhhh, do you hear them footsteps
(light whispering)
SAM
Yeah good joke mate ahaha
BEN
(Sarcastically)
OH no its a ghost
Suddenly a rock is thrown in to the tent
Ben and Sam are unaware of whats happened and think its a pinecone thats fallen from the trees above.
AALYAN
WHAT THE FUCK was that.
BEN
Another pinecone I guess.
AALYAN
Ben which fucking pinecone
looks like this.
AALYAN picks the rock that was thrown in.
SAM
OH SHIT
2 more rocks are thrown in , and Ben and Sam realise that Aalyan wasn’t joking and realise that someone is trying to attack them.
Aalyan instinctively picks up a penknife that was in his camping kit.
BEN
Im calling the police
SAM
Yeah do
AALYAN
NO DONT , we cant we will get done as well.
BEN
What we gonna do then..
All of a sudden the flashlights turn off , and someone is heard trying to open the tent . Aalyan shouts in defence trying to scare the person away. they shine a torch onto the tent creating a silhouette of many people surrounding the tent who slowly start getting closer to the tent.
2.
They suddenly start shaking the tent , Aalyan opens the middle compartment, he catches a glimpse of the face but all he sees is a blur.
AALYAN goes towards the main door of the tent to take a glimpse who it could be but as he is to poke his head out he hears footsteps in the tent he turns around and finds one of the men with his face covered with a balaclava, and a knuckle duster on one hand and knife in the other. Aalyans life flashes before his eyes (shown by images flashing of his past) . The attacker throws a punch which Aalyan ducks and returns with a low kick to the side of the knee temporarily forcing him to go to one knee. The balaclava clad man looks up and instinctively tries stabbing Aalyan, who sees this too late. Aalyan closes his eyes and out of nowhere massive thud is heard he opens his eyes to see BEN had bottled the man knocking him unconscious.
BEN
You’re welcome
AALYAN
Thanks , but what we doing now
with them.
AALYAN points to the rest outside the tent , who have suddenly be come motionless.
BEN
Wait … they've stopped moving.
SAM emerges for the sleeping compartment of the tent to where BEN and AALYAN are and notices the man laying on the floor.
SAM
What the fuck is happening , I
wanna go home.
Another man appears behind AALYAN , coincidentally wearing the exact same outfit as the man before .
AALYAN
We can’t leave like this
SAM grabs the tripod next to him , this is as the man behind Aalyan has pulled a knife behind Aalyans head.
AALYAN
What are you do… ( he is cut off)
SAM grabs the tripod and swings at AALYAN , who ducks the swing just before it hits the man behind him.
SAM
Saving your life.
2.
Aalyan is visibly shaken, as he looks behind to realise who was actually behind him.
AALYAN
WHAT THE FUCKKK..
SAM
A thank you would be nice.
AALYAN
Thank you
SAM
You’re welcome
BEN
So whats the plan.
AALYAN
Seeing as these 2 are dressed
identically its very likely that
the rest of them (outside the
tent) are as well. So I reckon we
take their clothes and we wear
them and try disguise as them and
slowly peel away from them?
BEN
Are you dumb?
AALYAN
I dunno about you but I don't
think us 3 can take on 5 or more
fully grown men who have knuckle
dusters and knives, especially
with you being a walking twig.
BEN
That’s not what I'm on about, theres only 2 people unconscious and theres 3 of us, and I dunno what you got in maths pal but that doesn’t add up.
AALYAN
Oh yeah, my bad
SAM
Right as you two are useless, I
reckon we use these two as
hostages.
AALYAN
What you trying to get at.
SAM
Im trying to say that two of us hold these two and hold a knife to
2.
their neck after we tie there
hands and feet to stop them
getting away., and walk out to
confront them outside…
BEN
So basically we threaten to kill
two members of their gang to try
and get out?
SAM
Yeah basically.
AALYAN
Sounds like a plan. You two hold
them and i will do the talking.
Sam and Ben both nod in agreement as they pick up the two unconscious men . Aalyan unzips the front entrance on the tent and walks out and is confronted by 5 men who are dressed the same as the two that are unconscious.
Sam and Ben drag the two men outside. And stand on each side of Aalyan whilst holding knives to the necks of the two men.
Each of the balaclava clad men have their faces lit up with a light that the source cant be found. This makes Aalyan , Sam and Ben suspicious.
AALYAN
Right then , I don't see what issue you lot have with us but we will give you a choice here, you can all leave now and never return or you could stay and watch your 2 mates die a slow and painful dea… (Aalyan is cut off by Ben)
BEN
Aalyan we have an issue
Aalyan turns around to find that the two unconscious men are no long in the hands of Ben and Sam.
AALYAN
What where have they gone?
SAM
I don’t know he just vanished into thin air.
Ben looks up to the other gang members and realises they have two more members
2.
BEN
There they are (pointing to the
gang who now have 7 members)
Aalyan and Sam have a glance , but then all of a sudden the lights turn off and pitch blacks is all that surround them . A quick flash of light circles the 3 , Ben screams in pain as the flashlights turn back on.
AALYAN
What was that?
SAM
Don’t know? Wheres Ben
Aalyan and Sam turn around to find that Ben covered in blood from his neck down , in the flash of the light Bens throat was slit.
As Aalyan and SAM start to approach BEN he completely disappears, and the gang return and circle SAM and
AALYAN.
AALYAN
What do you want from us ? we
haven't done anything.
GANG MEMBER (O.S)
We want you…
Suddenly another quick flash of light circles them and SAM has the same fate as BEN and is slit from his throat and is pain.
AALYAN
What do you want from me?
The 7 gang members merge into the middle man so they are all one person.
Aalyan back tracks and tries to retrieve his penknife which he dropped earlier.
GANG MEMBER
You wont be needing that…
The penknife vanishes .
AALYAN
Looks like you want to do the old
fashion way then.
AALYAN clenches his fist and steps forward as does the opponent.
2.
GANG MEMBER
Thats cute. You could have killed
me earlier, next time don't
hesitate when you have the chance
As the Gang member starts to approach Aalyan , a thud is heard from behind him .
To Aalyan shock Sam and Ben were both alive and had stabbed the Gang Member in the back.
Ben and Sam are dressed as his clones.
BEN
Thanks for the advice. (Ben and
Sam take off the balaclavas.
AALYAN
Thank fuck for that…
SAM
Your welcome.
AALYAN
Also i thought you both died.
BEN
He never killed us he killed his
own clones.
SAM
He must’ve glitched and his own
clones turned into us, and we
turned into his clones.
AALYAN
Ahh what was he then , cos he
isn't human at all.
BEN
Who knows , but lets get our stuff and go before someone notices this dead body.
2.
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