WALHT form correct sentences
Success Criteria | Self assessment |
I will look at the keywords on my plan and think about a sentence using some of them. | πππ |
I will begin my sentences with a capital letter and end with a full stop | ππ |
I will re read my sentence to make sure it makes sense | ππ |
I will make sure I only have one connecting word (and, then, because, so, as) | ππ |
How electricity gets to your home`
Did you know electricity travels through the power line? I will tell you how electricity is made. SteamΒ is made by burning coal Β and water and oil then it makes steam then it jurns. Throw pups andΒ then it gets spun around by a turbine blades of coper the turbine spins and push the wind thenΒ it gets pulled by a magnets the magnets pull the electricity to a power station the long wires go to a pilon it is to weak to reach a houses so that is why we use pilon.
Feedback - much better using full sentences and full stops!
Feedforward - make sure you still add a conclusion to the end of your explanation Β Β Β ok Miss A