PARAGRAPH 2

WALT write a PIE paragraph

The purpose of a PIE paragraph is to make a point explicitly clear to the reader.

We will be successful when we:

Me

Buddy

  • write the point

  • write information about the point using examples

  • explain why or how this information is related to the point

Paragraph 2

Write your own PIE paragraph

Other cats

Point

Dusky needing a safe place to eat and sleep.

Information about the point give a detailed example

Because Dusky could get really sick and  injured  from the rain . Dusky need a warm place to live in because she might get injured .  Hay Park School wants Dusky to be warm, safe , healthy and happy.Please can you donate $20 for Dusky.  

Explain - why is this information important?

This is important information to me and my school because we don’t want Dusky to be sick or sad we want her to feel like a hero because in Hay park school Dusky is always our hero .