My Holiday

WALT: write a recount about my school holiday  using effective paragraphs.

Topic: School Holidays.

Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.

Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.

Text type: Recount

Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:

delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, ecstatic, dismal, dreary…

Matariki, lights, Maori, New Year, celebration, plans...

Have you ever been to...

Wow! What an exciting …

Guess what? …

During the school holidays …

Last week...

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Structure:

P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?

P2: What happened?

P3: What happened next?

P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end?

How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?

Edit your writing:

Once you have finished make sure you have checked your work for spelling, capital letters, full stops and other punctuation. Does your writing say what you want it to say? Is it good enough to put on your blog?

Blog it!

Post your writing on your blog (only copy the part you have written yourself).

Share it!

Click on the little blue share button and share it with your teacher so she can mark it.

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Start writing here: In my holidays it was my sisters birthday and she turned 7 years old. On my sisters birthday we gave her a big Chocolate cake.In the afternoon we drove to the hospital to see my Auntys new born baby.Before we brought clothes for the baby. The End