Day 1: Sentence Combining
Here is the “Meet the Author” information about Jim Northrup, the author of “Wahbegan”, from our Literature textbook.
Jim Northrup (1943-) is a Native American short-story writer, poet, and syndicated columnist. He presents in his writings the rich and singular lives of Native Americans. He served in the Marine Corps and made a tour of duty through Vietnam. He was in the military for six years. In poems such as “Wahbegan,” he relates the experience of Vietnam and its aftermath. He lives with his wife and family. They live in the traditional life of the Chippewa in northern Minnesota.
Combine the following sentence sets from section above into one sentence.
They live in the traditional life of the Chippewa in northern Minnesota.
Sensory Details/Figurative Language Sets
In his poem, “Wahbegan,” Jim Northrup describes the tragic, emotionally scarring effects that the Vietnam War had on a veteran. Read the first stanza from the poem below, and create a sensory detail/figurative language set of your own to paint a detailed picture of war. You should construct three to four sentences to show war using expressive action verbs, and adjectives to describe what is seen, smelt, and tasted.
“Wahbegan”
by Jim Northrup
Didja ever hear a sound
smell something
taste something
that brought you back
5 to Vietnam, instantly?
Didja ever wonder when it would end?
It ended for my brother.
Random Note: Did you catch the pun in the poem’s title? It’s supposed to sound like “woe be gone,” which means “no more sadness.” The brother can’t be sad anymore because he committed suicide. I must have read this poem ten times before I noticed that trick.
Day 2: Textual Evidence
Please read the rest of the poem below, and construct text-based responses to the questions that follow.
He died in the war
10 but didn’t fall down
for fifteen tortured years.
His flashbacks are over,
another casualty whose
name will never be on the Wall.
15 Some can find peace
only in death.
The sound of his
family crying hurt.
The smell of the flowers
20 didn’t comfort us.
The bitter taste
In my mouth
still sours me.
How about a memorial
25 for those who made it
through the war
but still died
before their time?
Day 3: Literary Devices
A flashback in literature is a scene within a piece of writing that interrupts the sequence of events to relate events that occurred in the past. While the poem “Wahbegan” does not use a literary flashback, in our culture, we also use the word “flashback” for when Individuals experience very strong memories of incidents that have occurred in the past, and now replay in their minds (usually traumatic ones). In the poem, Northrup describes how the veteran’s experience of the war has resulted in “flashbacks” that cripple him emotionally.
What is the cause of the man’s “flashbacks”? Explain.
Reconstructing Sentences…
Please choose a writing piece of your own to revise for sentence variety. Rewrite three sentences using variety in your sentence beginnings. Be sure to write your original sentence and your revised version.