Indestructible

        One sunset long ago, there was not a pleasant end to the day. A flashing light came past sending a highly dangerous virus that even a nuke wouldn’t cure.It hit a nearby house that stood near the city river.The light was as thin as air.The light was most likely going to put the virus all around the house but instead it just stayed inside.

After few days there was little tint of light inside and the poor family that lived in the house knew something was wrong.They couldn’t afford to get the house checked so they just left it there.They hoped there wouldn’t be any harm and that they would be safe.The didn’t want to leave their house but they had to because they were hungry. First the male went out side but he had too much strength to be attacked by the virus.

The child went out next and just fell face flat to the ground.

Several centuries later the child woke up.His house had broken up into thin air.He found scars and shadings of dirt everywhere on his body.His shirt was ripped to shreds and he had holes in his shorts.He wondered where his parents were.

He was terrified. What ever could be out in the city?

If he built himself just a little tiny hut he knew he would get satisfaction. He needed about 20 sticks and some moss to make him warm enough to stay alive. But during the night his miniature hut blew away to the middle of nowhere.He woke up with no shelter but felt he was lucky enough to be alive.

During the day he walked past a bakery and asked for a whole loaf of bread and the employee said $5.75.

He didn’t have any money so he left. As he walked out of the shop someone knocked him flat to the ground.

He woke up tied to a chair.He forgot about the knock out but he then he saw a stranger walking up to him and throw a knife into his heart. Some how it didn’t effect him.The man was shocked.The child grew angry. The ropes that tied him burnt to dust and he ran to a window and smashed through it with no injuries or shards of glass inside him.He got through it with no problem,and that’s when he knew that he was Indestructible.

Feedback from buddy (Navid)

   Jack you have used interesting words like terrified, employed,loaf,and satisfaction.