Notes

Who- puppy Boy

What- The boy got a new puppy from his Mum

When -

Were-In the lounge

Why-        the boy was playing video games and his mum wanted him to do something else

Point of view-Boy

First   BANG CRASH

I was playing a video game on the tv I was just about to win woo I was so happy suddenly my mum came in and gave me a box come on mum I was just about to win.

Next then my mum told me to open the box  naa I said (mum)let me give some light inside aa my eyes .

Then I slowly opened the box qwr

and out jumps a puppy haa you scared me ha ha

After That.  she´s going to be kidding me bang as I chucked the box and the puppy on the ground.

Then what the a dog as I chuck the ball away then the puppy gets the ball come on!!

In the end it looks very funny

Huu lets play come on Mum!!well be outside ha ha ha.

 

                                                              The present Recount

BANG CRASH! I was playing a new video game at my house on the tv.  Woo and it’s about zombies...ooooo. I was just about to win but suddenly my mum came in and gave me a box. “Come on mum, I was just about to win” I said madly. Then my mum told me to open the box. “Naa”...like I always I say. Mum announced “let me give some light inside aa my eyes i'll be up stairs (mum said) . I slowly opened the box and out jumped a puppy haa you scared me ha ha you've got to be kidding me bang as I chucked the puppy and the box on the ground.now the puppy got a ball and as I chuck the ball away come on!!That looks funny huh come on(Mum!!) Well be outside ha ha I feel happy now.