Market Day Recount

WALT: write an interesting and detailed recount

We are writing a recount of our experience at our market day.

Plan

Introduction	Introduce the reader to our market day was on Friday Provide a hook so that the reader is interested and eager to read more.
Trade and Enterprise groups	Why are we having a market day? What did you make with your business to sell.
Setting up	Describe how we needed to set up the classrooms. What did you have to do. Where was your group set up?
Customers	When the Customers walked passed they immediately came to us and borut our panda cupcake’s.
Pt’s	[]if u don’t know what Pt’s are they like money but they are plastic and is 2x the price then Nz Money[] We earned a lot of money and we each got 16 Pt and that's a lot.
Conclusion	What were your thoughts about the market day.

1. You are going to write an introduction paragraph here:

I can sum up the past term by using the immortal words of Bobby Shmurda:[[][][][][][][][][][][][][][][]]

About a week ago week ago ma mama[aka Mr somerville] said i need a dolla dalla and den i got 16 dallas now ima be rich. And den we had a trade fair about 4 week ago 4 week ago and and we Chris, Desmond, Me got 11 Pt’s!

Highlight on the rubric where you think your introduction scores.

Hook

My introduction is boring.

It is difficult to read.

My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.

My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.

When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.

Orientation

My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.

My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.

My audience is clear what I am writing about.

My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Trade and Enterprise Groups

Our 6 Trade and Enterprise Groups are custom stationery,kitchen,music,toys,homeware,accessories.my group is kitchen and the first trade fair we made wheely bronies.The next time it was called a market day which was way better.Because more products were finished.

Setting up

Conclusion (1-2 sentences)

Highlight on the rubric where think your writing scores

Recount Writing
	1	2	3	4
Write for my reader	I've tried to think about my reader	My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.	My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.	My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
Purpose	I tried to meet the purpose	My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose	The message is clear in some parts of the recount.	My text fully meets the purpose. The message is clear all through the recount.
Introduction	My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.	My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.	My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics	My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.	I have tried to follow my plan. Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.	My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea. I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.	My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.