WALT observe and record details.
WALT write detailed and descriptive recounts.
What I saw... | Where I saw it... | How I felt... |
Tamaki College kids walking to school. My friends walking to school. | along Line Road while my Dad was driving. half way down Dunn Road, I was in my grey car. | glad I’m not in high school. sad because their mum didn’t take them to school. |
when my dad drove up the hill I saw the Panmure Mountain which is as big as the sky tower. ollies, chips and fizzy drinks when i walked into the shop. | driving past Pt England School. I was at Tripoli Dairy. | as happy as a boy who just opened his xmas presents. As hungry as a horse. |
the patrol people on pedestrian My friend calais who was waving at me. | driving past slowly as slow as a green tortise. he was over the other side of the road it looked like he was far away as far as the moon. | safe because we were driving slowly. overjoyed at seeing him. |
lots of yellow and and blue running around, looking like the sun and the night the seniors playing touch running around like they are as fast as a cheetah. | i was walking down the path going past the tall green trees. top court. | Excited that all my friends are at school. Ready for a great day. I felt the sun warming me up ready for a great day at school. |