WALT observe and record details.

WALT write detailed and descriptive recounts.

What I saw...

Where I saw it...

How I felt...

Tamaki College kids walking to school.

My friends walking to school.

along Line Road while my Dad was driving.

half way down Dunn Road, I was in my grey car.

glad I’m not in high school.

sad because their mum didn’t take them to school.

when my dad drove up the hill I saw the Panmure Mountain which is as big as the sky tower.

ollies, chips and fizzy drinks when i walked into the shop.

driving past Pt England School.

I was at Tripoli Dairy.

as happy as a boy who just opened his xmas presents.

As hungry as a horse.

the patrol people on pedestrian

My friend calais who was waving at me.

driving past slowly as slow as a green tortise.

he was over the other side of the road it looked like he was far away as far as the moon.

safe because we were driving slowly.

overjoyed at seeing him.

lots of yellow and and blue running around, looking like the sun and the night

the seniors playing touch running around like they are as fast as a cheetah.

i was walking down the path going past the tall green trees.

top court.

Excited that all my friends are at school. Ready for a great day.

I felt the sun warming me up ready for a great day at school.