Dogs at the beach

Imagine you are at the beach watching these dogs. Write to describe that moment in time. Give as many details as you can.

Describe:

• what you see
• what you smell
• what you hear
• what you are thinking as you watch the dogs

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• write in full sentences
• take care with your spelling and punctuation
• give your writing a title if you want to
• check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find

Start writing here:    

I can see the dogs splashing and running around having fun in the water. Running and sand stuck in there feet.  They look really happy and having fun . There is water and sand everywhere. All the different kinds of dogs and how the dogs are getting scared by some of the big waves.

I can smell the salt and other people and the dogs only if they are smelly and other things on the beach.

I can hear the dogs barking , the people running . All the different kinds of dogs who are galloping in the water . I can hear other people talking . The  small little waves near the beach and some of the big waves near the beach.

As i was watching the dogs i was thinking  that i am free i can do anything run around talk to other people . I was thinking that the dogs are really happy in the beach and how can they have so much energy to go play with other dogs i was so excited to go in the beach with my family and i will have fun and play with them it will the awesome .