Blog #3 - Revising “Why Explore?”

Minimum - Revise the "Why Explore?" to include evidence/story from your life.

Great - Revise the "Why Explore?" to include evidence/story from your life and add a connection to The Allegory of the Cave

Ultimate Goal - Revise the "Why Explore?" to include evidence/story from your life and add a connection to The Allegory of the Cave. Schedule a writing conference with Mike to critique and discuss the writing piece.

Why? Our perspectives change as we grow, experience the world, see new things and share our life with other people. The experiences that you all have planned will take you to some beautiful places and show your eyes some amazing things. This essay should evolve as you continue through these experiences. How does camping, hiking, capturing the stars playing in the ocean and hanging out with friends change and support your thinking? The goal here is to revisit and re-engage with a small piece of writing that we can polish. At the end you should have a publishable piece!

Questions for Revision