I am learning about adding detail to my writing.

I know I can do this when:

  • my writing includes information about who, where, when, why
  • my writing makes sense

  • Read the writing
  • Change the colour of the words that give you information as follows--

Who- red

Where- green

When - blue

Why - purple

What - yellow

It was such a beautiful, sunny day. In the morning I met up with my friends and cousins. We all walked down to the beach with my mum and dad. We got to play in the sand and make sandcastles. We made a huge sandcastle with a moat around it. Then we took the paddle boards into the water and had fun in the waves. We had to be careful to stay in between the flags. My mum took out the yummy food from the basket. We had sandwiches, fruit and chips. We even got to eat ice-cream! It is fun to visit the beach.