Element

Why did you give the score?

Ideas

3

I  can  write  an  idea  with  some  added  detail.

Structure and Language

2

I  can say`when and who. I can say how I felt.

Organisation

3

I can write my ideas in order.

Sentences

2

My sentences make sense.

Vocabulary

2

I can use some simple everyday words.

Punctuation

2

I am beginning to use capital letrters and fullstops.

Spelling

2

I can write some words correctly.

16

1p

What do you need to work on to improve your writing?

I need to use more interesting words. I need to use full stops and capital letters in the right place.