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Homework Re-write 1
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Congratulations on being able to write your own story in English.

The next step is to fix all the grammar and vocabulary mistakes.

Unfortunately, if the teacher helps you with this too much, you won’t learn how to write English on your own.  Fixing your own mistakes will help you better remember the grammar for next time.

So, the teacher has underlined the mistakes for you, but not corrected them.  Your job is to try to fix these grammar mistakes on your own.

Don’t ask the teacher for help yet.  

Don’t worry.  If you’re still having trouble with the grammar, the teacher will give you more detailed feedback on your next draft.  But first, try to fix everything by yourself.

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