WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
Topic: PES Olympics Egg 20metre Sprint race.
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell anyone in the world who reads our blogs about our exciting egg race.
Text type: Recount
Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Yolk, sprint, frightened, nervous, killing, died, happy, excited, shaking, crunching, crunched, spoon, running, fighting, rotten, egg, decorating, designing, name, sadly, hair, pen, vivid, country, buddy, Olympics, crying, PES Olympics, slimy, gooey, tragedy, competition, stinky, concerned, heartbroken, sad, brain damaged, ugly, depressed, horrible, breakable, fragile, careful, cautious, damaged, indestructible, sacrifice, risk, out of control, devastated, carefully, calm, delicate, challenging, gentle, scary, |
Introduction: Who, Where,What, When
Describing our egg - draw on ideas, name, country
Start the race, instructions.
What happened during the race.
What happened to your friends
Conclusion: Highlight - favourite thing.
Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Introduciton - who what where when. | 1 sentences | MakerBots & Drones |
2 sentences | Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos |
Write Here: Who Room 9.What Egg race.When monday.Where pt England school.
Paragraph 2
Describing our egg. | 2 sentences | MakerBots & Drones |
3 sentences | Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos |
Write Here: My Egg is name is could Bryan.Bryan came from jamaica.And my friend
Paragraph 3
What happen in the race | 2 sentences | MakerBots & Drones |
3 sentences | Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos |
Write Here: When the race started i was coming 1st and you no what
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
(Write your main idea for this paragraph here) | 1 sentences | MakerBots & Drones |
1 sentences | Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos |
Write Here: My highlight for the day is race and draw