Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels

It’s Sunday morning I woke up at 11.20am. I got changed. I washed my face, put on my socks and shoes. I made myself a drink and made me some food to take with me. I had nutri grain for breakfast. I made a chicken sandwich and took an apple pie and a bacon and egg pie. I went with my best friend Chichi, her brother and her dad to Ten Pin Bowling. When we first got there we went to the counter. The lady was at the counter wanted to know our names. The lady gave us some bowling shoes to wear.

Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives

I went tenpin bowling with my best friend bff chichi  she came with her dad  and  her brother.We went to the bowling alley in Panmure. I had a great time going to the tenpin bowling. I hope now Chichi goes for a spare / strike. Chichi was versing me. I got a strike during the next round. Chichi also got a strike.

We paid $92 for as many games.

We left at 10.00pm. I felt so tired when we left. When I got home I made a banana milkshake and a chocolate milkshake. I watched a little bit of TV before I went to bed. When I went to sleep I got a sheet on the bed  and a blanket. I turned off the TV and went to sleep. I turned off the TV at midnight. It was so fun that night. So when I got up at midnight my Mum was up. She was doing the dishes and I helped.

Conclusion

Sums up how you felt about the experience.

It was so much fun going ten pin bowling and knocking down skittles.

I felt so excited going Ten Pin Bowling in Panmure.